meaning

GENRE:

a category of artistic composition, as in music or literature,characterized by similarities in form, style, or subject matter.

CLICHE:

a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought.

STEREOTYPE:

an idea, trait , convention etc, that has grown stale through fixed usage.

a set of inaccurate, simplistic generalizations about a group that allows others to categorize them and treat them accordingly.

the lost of one week memories.

she woke up finding herself lock up in a room. she looked around and realise everything around her was dark and she could not see a thing. trying to get out, she uses her strength to stand up and look for a way to get out. suddenly, a voice spoke up. " there's no way we can get out." she was shocked and turned around. a 60 year old looking man was sitting behind her on the ground. " is you! why are we here?! where is this place?!" she shouted. The old man replied,"we got kidnapped."

Suddenly, a door open. 9 men were standing infront of them with guns on their hands. Jessica and Thisted stayed side by side with each other immediately after they saw the gun. "What do you all want from us?!" they remain silent and threw two bowls of rice into the room and locked it up after that. Jessica and Thisted recalled, one week ago, they came to Somalia for a volunteering work. They were about to leave and were on their way to the airport in Galkayo when suddenly, someone hit hard on their back of their head. And that's when they went into coma.

Galkayo is seperated into two different section. A northern section under the control of the semi autonomous region of Puntland, and a southern section under the control of the Galmudug clan. Jessica and Thisted were kidnapped when they crossed into the southern side of the town and were abducted there.

back to now, both of them were traumatize after recalling. They do not know if they can leave this place alive or not. however, they still need energy if one day they manage to escape. without hesitating, they picked up the bowl of rice and ate them immediately. after eating, there was nothing they can do. all they can do was to sit down in the dark room and pray, hoping someone will come for their rescue. eventually, both of them fell asleep due to tiredness.

not long later, they heard a loud bang and gun's shooting outside the room. they woke up immediately and tries to listen what's happening outside the room. in few minutes time, the sounds outside the room disappear. in the next moment, they heard loud bangs outside the room and people screaming," anyone inside!" after hearing this, they screamed back immediately. "YES! PLEASE SAVE US!"

in a split second, the door was bang opened. at that moment, they immediately recognized they are the US millitary rescue force. they are here for them!

few hours time, the both of them reached U.S and finally met up with their family.

1 sentence pitch

what is the story about?

- many against one. ( for the birds)

-when snowman tries to get use to summer.(Pixar knick knack)

-when music is far more precious than life. (bon jovi- its my life)

-the unique flamingo. ( fantasia flamingos)

-the pig fart that knock out the dinosaur. (dinosaur farts)

what makes a good story.

-good story line.

-good content

-good dialogues

-have a good start, middle, and ending./ 3 act structure.

-starting of the story have to be exciting/ start with a BANG!

-the content of the story have to be able to ATTRACT readers.

-example: if the story is about horror, have to be really SCARY at the same time attract the reader to want to continue reading.

-interesting CHARACTERS.

childhood fairy tales story.

she wore the heel and step into the church

standing right infront of the pastor and her relatives and friends,

holding hands with the man she loves.

Together they say the wedding vows.

"To have and to hold,
From this day forward,
For better, for worse,
For richer, for poorer,
In sickness and in health,
To love and to cherish,
'Till death do us part."

Finally, she is able to married to the guy she loves...

early in the morning,

Jane was cleaning the kitchen when her stepmother called out to her.

she immediately run to her room bringing her breakfast along.

after serving her,

time to prepare breakfast on the dinning table for her 2 step sisters.

jane's dad past away few years back.

he married another lady before he died and now,

she's Jane's stepmother.

and this stepmother did not only invite herself into the family alone.

she had even bring 2 daughters along with her.

and this made Jane to hav 2 older step sisters.

so after Jane's dad is gone,

they treated Jane badly, making her do all chores at home

and had to even serve them breakfast every morning.

but Jane never every complained.

few days later,

Jane's stepmother invited one of her friend, Mrs Lim to the house with the son along.

She ordered Jane to serve them all the nice food at home.

the truth is,

Jane's stepmother is actually matchmaking her friend's son to her daughters.

this friend of hers' is not just anybody ordinary.

She's the wife of a big company's boss and this make the son of her's the inheritance.

she called out to her daughters and introduce them to the son.

his name is Lucas.

after chatting for few hours,

it's time for the mother and son to leave.

before they left,

Jane's stepmother whispered to the daughters and tell them to exchange numbers

in order to contact each other more and they can hang out together.

so they did.

one day,

Jane's stepmother came running back to the house with a bang.

this shocked everyone in the house and everyone came running.

her mother shouted," we are invited to Mrs Lim's 45th birthday celebration in a... 5 STAR HOTEL!"

her daughter and her started jumping around the house happily like a jumping jack.

Jane was also happy too.

what she did not know was his happiness did not last long.

one week before the celebration,

the 3 evil women started planning and preparing what they are going to wear

and what presents they are bringing.

at the same time,

Jane was also preparing her clothing.

she sew herself a nice dress using her old dress and some left over cloths and ribbons.

finally,

the day is here.

the 3 evil women starts to prepare themselves.

dress up, make up, preparing presents and they are done.

5 mins before they leave the house,

Jane came running down wearing her dress.

the stepmother turned and said," what are you doing? where do you think you are going? you are not going with us to the celebration. who do you think you are, you are not even fit to step into the hotel!"

the 2 step sisters nodded their head.

at the same time,

one spotted Jane's dress and was angry.

she saw a ribbon that was used to sew on one of dress was on Jane.

she walked towards her and teared the ribbon down.

the other,

came and join in,

pulling and tearing.

in the end, Jane's dress was in a mess,

while the 3 of them left the house with a happy smile on their face.

Jane fell on to the floor with big water droplets falling from her eyes.

just in time,

a lady walked in to the house through the door which was not fully closed.

she walked towards Jane and hold her up.

"why are you crying? i thought you were attending the party?"

Jane shook her head using her husky voice said," they did not want me to go. they even tore my dress."

this lady here,

she's actually Jane's neighbour.

she have been helping Jane whenever she needs help in chore.

she know a lot of things about her including th 3 evil women.

immediately,

she run back home and brought back a pack of dresses in her hands.

"quick, get into your room, i borrowed my daughter's dresses. Try them all."

in just a few mins,

Jane change into a beautiful nice dress and she looks good in it.

She looks different with make up on too.

now,

the transport.

the lady quickly drove her car over and asked Jane if she know the address to the Hotel.

Jane said yes.

it took them half an hour to reached

but still,

they got there in time.

Jane walked into the hotel ballroom without her stepmother and sisters noticing.

she picked up a glass of drink and stood at one of the corner.

suddenly,

the lights went dark.

the host of the night announced that Mrs Lim is coming out.

holding her son's hand, Mrs Lim smiled to each and everyone.

her son beside her staring at each and everyone.

in one glance,

he spotted Jane at one corner.

after bringing her mother to her dad,

Luca's immediately went over to Jane and

asked for a dance.

Jane was shy at first but in the end,

Luca's still brought her to the dance floor.

at the beginning,

Jane was afraid that her stepmother and sisters will spot her,

but because of the dimmed light,

she was lucky that none of them recognize her,

but they did jealous about her that she's able to dance with Lucas.

Luca's and Jane even took a photo together at the party.

time flies...

it was 15 mins to 12am.

Jane suddenly remembered that her stepmother is coming back home at 12am.

she let off Luca's hand and started running out.

calling to her neighbour.

she picked Jane up and drove off immediately.

Lucas did not know what happen and could not catch up with Jane,

leaving only a photo with him.

few days after,

one day, Jane was ordered to go out and get a few dresses from a shop for her step sisters.

after retrieving the dresses from the shop,

Jane left and was holding the dresses on her hands.

the dresses wasnt light.

they had weights and this causes Jane to fell

while waiting for the traffic light.

a guy came over and help her pick up.

when they stood up the guy and Jane was stunned.

they recognize each other.

it was Lucas.

later,

they went to a cafe and had a drink.

Lucas told her that,

after that day, he never forget her.

he keep thinking about her but did not know how to look for her.

Jane looked at him and asked," you dont remember me isnt it."

Lucas was confused.

Jane continued," im the girl that served you when you came to my house with your mum."

Lucas stared with Jane with his eyes open big.

after a few hours of chat,

Luca's got to know about Jane's background and her family issues.

suddenly,

Luca's told Jane," shall we go on a date secretly together?"

Jane was shocked and agreed.

for few months, they dated each other secretly without their parents knowing.

one day,

Luca's appear at their house.

the sisters was shocked and happy thinking that Luca is here for them.

holding a box, he was warmly welcomed by the sisters and the stepmother.

"what are you doing here today Lucas?" smiling while asking, the stepmother.

he replied," im here for your daughter."

both sisters was so happy after hearing this and started sitting nearer to Lucas.

the stepmother asked," you looking for mary or maya?"

he continued," i brought a pair of heels for her."

immediately,

both sisters open the box without asking and started trying the heels.

but sadly, none of their legs fit.

it was too small for both of them.

one of the sister asked," Luca, the heels is for us right, its in the wrong size. think you need to get it changed."

smiling back to them, Luca's replied," not for you girls. this heels is for Jane."

he called out to Jane and immediately,

Jane came running down.

he hugged her tightly and told her," i bought you this heels, i want you to wear it on our wedding day."

Jane was lost of words after hearing this.

Lucas came to asked for her hands.

everyone in the house was shocked.

"i will fetch you tomorrow for registration alright."

Jane nodded her head with happiness.

on that night,

Jane's stepmother was furious and locked Jane up in the store room.

the next day,

Lucas came early in the morning to look for Jane,

but Jane's step mother told Lucas that Jane was not at home.

she did not know where did she go.

Lucas did not believe her and started shouting at Jane's name.

Jane heard her name and starting banging the door.

Jane's step mother continued saying that Jane is really not at home

and the banging sound comes from others.

Luca's did not give up.

he ran up and found Jane locked in the store room.

he told the stepmother to open the door but she did not want to.

Lucas picked up his phone and said that he's going to call the police if she

do not open the door.

but the step mother was not afraid.

she said," even if you call, i can tell the police that she had mental problems and we have to lock her up in order to keep her safe."

Lucas had no choice.

suddenly,

the main door started knocking.

one of the step sisters went to open the door.

it was Luca's mum.

she brought along police with her and arrested Jane's stepmother.

"what are you doing! why are you arresting me?!"

Luca's mum replied," you liar. how dare you steal my cheaque on my celebration and now, you are even bullying my son! im going to put you in jail!"

after that,

Luca's manage to save Jane and the stepmother,

was charged and put into jail for years.

back to now,

Jane wore the pair of heels.

its time for her to put on her wedding gown,

and attend her wedding.

THH END~

Character write up.

The Chronicle Of Narnia.( the lion, the witch and the wardrobe)

Lucy is the youngest among all her siblings and she's also the first one to discover Narnia. She was playing hide and seek with her siblings at her grandfather’s house and decided to hide in his grandfather's wardrobe where it was kept in a room. That is when she found Narnia after walking in to the wardrobe. In Narnia, she met her first new friend, Tumnus. He’s controlled by the white witch to look for humans that are born Son of Adam and Daughter of Eve. But he did not harm Lucy because Lucy treated him nice, and because of this, he could not bare to report that he found Lucy to the white witch. Lucy was brought back to the real world by tumnus . he even persuaded Lucy not to come back to Narnia.

Back to the real world,

Lucy is easily hurt and easily teased by her siblings. When she told her siblings about Narnia, the magical world, none of them believe her. Lucy might be the only one that truthfully believes in Narnia the most as she had been there before. She tries to convey his siblings to believe her at the beginning and never give up on it.

After returning to Narnia, with her siblings along, Lucy became braver than before.

She learn to protect herself and her sister Susan when in danger. she is full of courage and is much more adventurous than her sister and also, Lucy is the most faithful out of all her siblings, and which is why, she was able to spot Aslan across the gorge and her brothers and sister didn't. Aslan is the Lion and also the king that ruled and keep the peace in Narnia.

Back to Lucy, because of her courage and faithfulness, Lucy was given a magic potion in Narnia. This magic potion could save anybody that are injured or might be dying. During a fight, a war with the white witch, Edmund, Lucy’s second older brother was stabbed by the white witch using a sword and was nearly dying. She immediately gave a drop of the potion that was given by Aslan in to his brother’s mouth. Just in a spilt second, she brought Edmund back to live. Not only her brother, Lucy had even saved warriors that nearly died during the war. She revived all of them.

And also, in order to save Edmund away from the white witch, Aslan sacrifices himself to the white witch in exchange of Edmund. He was killed on the stone table by the witch but later, The following morning Aslan was bavk to life. What the witch did not know was, "deeper magic from before the dawn of time" allows someone who is willingly to dies in the place of another to return to life.

At that time, Lucy stayed beside Aslan till dawn came. She dropped tears for Aslan’s death and which shows Lucy to be a caring, thoughtful and emotional girl.

At the end of the story,

Lucy was crowned as the queen of Narnia along with all her siblings.

the letter and the faith.

they were once the closest best friends.

but now,

things had changed ever since that day...

jess and lyn were always hanging out tgt.

they got to know each other thru a marathon run.

that day,

was a world wide marathon run competition.

jess came in first while Lyn was second.

after the run, there was a after dinner.

Jess and Lyn sat tgt and started chatting happily.

they realise, both of them have similar hobbies and interest.

both of them love running, mountain climbing and more.

soon,

they became best friends.

they even went to the same school for their university.

one day,

they decided to go for mountain climbing together.

before that night,

they both were so excited,

as this is their first time going for a climb together.

they went to stores and got their necessaries.

the next day,

they met up at the station and took the bus

to the bottom of the mountain.

after getting off the bus,

they started their journey up to the top of the mountain.

As both of them has good stamina,

climbing up wasn't a difficult task for them.

it took them 3 hours to reach the top of the mountain

when others need half of the day.

they found a good spot and sat down.

taking out the food that they bought the previous night,

they started eating.

they rested for an hour and decided to head home.

suddenly,

Jess suggested to walk from the other route which she thinks

is shorter.

Lyn tries to tell Jess not to, but Jess promised lyn that she will

get them back down the mountain before the night falls.

so they started their way down.

after walking for 1 hour, they realised that they are lost,

and the route seems harder to walk compared to the previous

route they had took.

Lyn starts to get tired and slowed down.

Jess was leading and did not realise that Lyn was at the back.

Lyn picked up her speed and manage to catch up with Jess.

who knows,

Jess did not realise Lyn was just right behind her and so she turned back

without looking carefully.

in just a split second,

Lyn was hanging on the side of the cliff.

Jess was shocked and tried to pull Lyn up,

but was not successful.

in just a moment,

jess was screaming for help at the top of her voice

and her pair of eyes staring fearfully at Lyn,

lying at the bottom of the cliff.

the next day, both of them was lying the hospital unconsciously.

Jess was the first to wake up.

immediately, she run to Lyn's room and take a look at her.

the sight was horrifying.

Lyn is still in a coma.

Jess slowly walked over to Lyn.

her family was standing around her waiting for her to wake up.

lyn's mother saw jess walking in.

immediately, she turns and pushed jess away.

"GET OUT!"

Jess was stummed.

she did not know what happen.

lyn's mother started crying.

Jess walked forward and hold on to lyn's mother

and asked what had happen.

Lyn's mum stood up, pushed jess away from her

and walked towards lyn's bed.

she pulled away the blanket that was covered on lyn.

Jess fell onto the ground immediately.

the sight shocked her.

Lyn is lying on the bed,

but with only one leg left.

Jess begged lyn's mother to tell her what happen.

lyn's mother stumbled and said," if you did not bring her for mountain climbing,

she will not fall. the doctor said that, when she fell, one of her legs was hit onto the ground. her bone was hit too hard and cant be healed. the blood is clot on the knee and below. if they dont dismembered her leg, they might have to cut off the thighs too."

after telling jess what had happen, lyn's mother sat down restlessly.

hearing all this, jess could not take it and ran out of the room.

for a few days, jess could not faced lyn at all.

not even stepping into her room.

one week later, jess is discharged from the hospital.

but until the last day, jess still did not went and take a look at lyn.

what she did was leaving a letter to the nurse and asked about lyn's condition.

the nurse told jess that lyn is alrgt.

her condition is stable but she refused to talk to anyone.

one year passed.

jess and lyn did not contact at all.

on a sunday,

jess was walking in a park that she and lyn always head down

almost everyday after class.

she sat down on a bench and stared in space.

suddenly, someone sat beside her but she did not really take a look at it.

for a while later,

jess stood up and took a glances at the person.

she stops.

it was lyn.

she gave jess a smile and stretch out her hand

to pulled jess back to the bench lightly.

she took out the letter that jess gave to her and started reading:

i know at this time, you will not want to see me.

i do not hav the courage to face you too.

i just wanna apologise for what happen,

maybe a sorry is useless now.

it cant get ur leg back.

if time can be turned back, i hope the person was me

that fall and not u.

im really sorry for not able to pulled u back.

i tried my best. i really did.

but i just lose the strength.

im really really sorry.

i will not forgive myself.

so from now on,

i will leave,

from ur life.

but u will always be my best friend and nobody else.

jess cries when hearing lyn reading out the letter.

the letter did not end here.

" i had already forgiven u. i know u tried. u tried hard to pull me back and i know it. i felt it." lyn told jess.

jess pulled lyn to her and hugged her tightly.

"thank you, really thank you!" jess cried and said.

the letter flown...

from now on,

i will be ur pair of legs, i will run for u, climb the mountain for u, ride for u.

no matter how hard it is, i will be there to bring ur faith along.

no matter are u there to support me or not,

i will still be there for u and be ur legs.

no matter how hard or difficult it is, promise me, u will stand up.

i know u can.

i will support u in my heart like how u will be supporting me.

and this is,

the last part of the letter.